Leon Hart, A lions courage

Character name: Leon Hart
Code name/ Alias/ nickname: Lion
Weapon Name: Lions fangs

Ability name: Lions Heart
Flame: Rain

Desired Rank: I don't know
Desired Family: Whatever you think I would be good in
Age: 17

Character Appearance: Leon Hart has short, black hair and light blue eyes. He is about five foot 8 and weighs about 133 pounds. He wears a black and white checkered jacket over a white t-shirt that has Hart on the front of it. He has a pair of black and white checkered pants that have a chain from the back pocket to the side pocket on the left and right. His shoes are plain black and he has a black, fingerless glove on his left hand and a white fingerless glove on his right.

Character Personality: Leon is a cool, calm collective guy. He is usually thought to be a shy person with how he stays away from other people.

Character Background: Leon was born in Namimori to a Kyle and Rune Hart. When he turned 2, he was discovered by his dad to have a 'flame'. He never told him though due to his young age. When he turned 4, his mother died due to sickness. *I changed it*, Since then, he has lived with his father. When he turned 6, he was put in Namimori's 'little' school. There, he made friends until something happened and he lost all his friends. He got into a fight with one of his friends, causing him to lose all of his friends. When he turned 10, Leon and his dad moved away from Namimori to a neighboring city for awhile. While there, he made no friends, he hated all the teachers and kids due to the pathetic way they acted, and wanted to come back to Namimori. When he turned 13 years old, his father decided to take him back to Namimori and home school him for awhile. His father taught him other things, he taught him how to fight and defend himself using the Hart Family technique, the Lions Fist. When he turned 15, he was taken out of homeschooling and put into Namimori High School where he has started to open up to others and is finally making friends with everyone. He discovered that he had a Rain Flame not long afterwards from his father due to he having the same flame. *Is this better than before*

Role play sample:
Leon stood at the entrance to Namimori Middle School, with his hands in his pockets. As he stood there, the wind slowly blew by him, making dust and dirt surround him. He pulled his hands out of his pockets to wipe the dirt off his pants when a peace of trash hit him in the face. He reached up with his left hand and pulled it off. On it, was a flyer to a concert to LM.C's Boys and Girls. Leon smiled to himself as he un-wrinkled the flyer and then folded it to put in his pocket. He leaned foward as he finished dusting himself off and walked off the school grounds.

*I may be better than this, i'm just tired right now*

Make your history longer, much longer.

Your history really doesn't seem all that much longer ... BUUUUT. Seeing as how you're undecided as to which family to join and what rank to possess, I suppose it'll be adequate >.>;;

This will not be approved until you feel better and finish the sample, please.

Your personality also needs some expansion.

Character name: Leon Hart
Code name/ Alias/ nickname: Leo
Weapon Name: Lions fangs

Ability name: Lions Heart
Flame: Rain

Desired Rank: I don't know
Desired Family: Whatever you think I would be good in
Age: 17

Character Appearance: Leon Hart has short, black hair and light blue eyes. He is about five foot 8 and weighs about 133 pounds. He wears a black and white checkered jacket over a white t-shirt that has Hart on the front of it. He has a pair of black and white checkered pants that have a chain from the back pocket to the side pocket on the left and right. His shoes are plain black and he has a black, fingerless glove on his left hand and a white fingerless glove on his right.

Character Personality: When Leon is around his friends, he isn't a very shy guy. When he is with his friends, he is a cool, calm, collective type boy who loves to hang out with his buds. But, if he is in an area where his friends are nowhere to be seen or found, he is considered a very shy guy who hates being around those he doesn't know.

Character Background: Leon was born in Namimori to a Kyle and Rune Hart. When he turned 2, he was discovered by his dad to have a 'flame'. He never told him though due to his young age. When he turned 4, his mother died due to sickness. *I changed it*, Since then, he has lived with his father. When he turned 6, he was put in Namimori's 'little' school. There, he made friends until something happened and he lost all his friends. He got into a fight with one of his friends, causing him to lose all of his friends. When he turned 10, Leon and his dad moved away from Namimori to a neighboring city for awhile. While there, he made no friends, he hated all the teachers and kids due to the pathetic way they acted, and wanted to come back to Namimori. When he turned 13 years old, his father decided to take him back to Namimori and home school him for awhile. His father taught him other things, he taught him how to fight and defend himself using the Hart Family technique, the Lions Fist. When he turned 15, he was taken out of homeschooling and put into Namimori High School where he has started to open up to others and is finally making friends with everyone. He discovered that he had a Rain Flame not long afterwards from his father due to he having the same flame. *Is this better than before*

Role play sample:
Leon stood at the entrance to Namimori Middle School, with his hands in his pockets. As he stood there, the wind slowly blew by him, making dust and dirt surround him. He pulled his hands out of his pockets to wipe the dirt off his pants when a peace of trash hit him in the face. He reached up with his left hand and pulled it off. On it, was a flyer to a concert to LM.C's Boys and Girls. Leon smiled to himself as he un-wrinkled the flyer and then folded it to put in his pocket. He leaned foward as he finished dusting himself off and walked off the school grounds.